I have just finished writing a sex scene for The Tilt of Justice
. When do you use a metaphor or when can you use the real deal. I didn't want it to sound like a biology lesson, and yet I wanted some realism.
words not to use?
Hump,pump,grind,wack,rip one off,root, give her one,fuck.
How do you say what you want to say without saying it and still put it in, (excuse the alluded pun)